Kia ora, I am a student at Belfast School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share and Grow.
Wednesday, April 7, 2021
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Great work Hollie. Your DLO looks great and I really like your choice of font for this poem. The words you have selected describe you perfectly. What would be your favourite arts and crafts to do?
ReplyDeleteThank you for commenting.I love doing arts and crafts Well I love doing origami for my crafts and i love sketching for my art.Do you like doing arts and craft?
DeleteHi Hollie
ReplyDeleteThis is very good but I think it would a bit better if you put some commas in there and then it would sound a bit better.
Taliyah