Kia ora, I am a student at Belfast School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share and Grow.
Friday, September 24, 2021
ThE mOsT aMaZiNg HoUsE
1 comment:
To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - Begin with a greeting. Talk about something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A comment that will mean something to me to let me know you read/watched or listened to what I had to say. - use any language.
3. Something helpful - Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
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Hello Hollie,
ReplyDeleteI am Devanshi from New Windsor School. I really liked the way you and your friend described the house. My favourite part was when you said that you buried your family in the attic. Next time you could work a bit on your spelling.
From Devanshi